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2019-12-10 18:30来源:互联网编辑:小狐

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Some people believe that young people should spend morefree time on their families at home and less time on entertainment outside thehome. Others disagree. Discuss both views andgive your opinion.

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The family closeness has been reduced to a historically lowlevel in last decade. Some people claim that young peoples free time should bemore allotted to the families at home rather than the entertaining activitiesoutside the home. Others, however, find it difficult to justify this proposal.

Spending more time at home tends to have a favorable influenceon young people. The key reason lies in the fact that they may always facedifficulties in coping with challenges both in study and work. For example, itis common that kids may encounter problems in ng friends with their peerswhen they are enrolled in the primary school. As a result, if the free time isabundant for them to stay with their parents, these family members canconveniently offer them more advices based on their own experience.

Moreover, the family relations can also be affected positivelywhen more time is available to be spent together. The youth who are induced tohang out with their friends or simply play some exciting games at bars are lesslikely to sit around a table to start an intimate talk with their familymembers. In the long run, there is a widening generation gap between them andtheir parents, which possibly results in the increasing alienation in thefamily. By contrast, if there are more chances for the young to communicatewith family members, less misunderstanding will happen. The family closenesscan be greatly promoted.

Some people may argue that it is unreasonable to require theyoung to sacrifice their time supposed to be dedicated to the entertainments,because these activities are more relaxing and helpful to delight them. Indeed,to some extent, participating more in recreation, such as holding parties,drinking at bars and singing in the karaoke enables them to temporarily jumpout of the reality and find an outlet for their strong emotions and pressuregenerated from their work and study however, they are oversimplifying thesituation. In fact, young people may not necessarily feel relaxed by frequentlygetting involved in entertainments. Instead, when the young excessively gobar-hopping, socialise with their friends or even strangers, their energy willbe quickly consumed or even burned. It is more likely for them to feelexhausted and even frustrated.

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范文,人名。1967年2月生于内蒙古武川县,中共党员,工学博士,博士研究生导师,长安大学副校长。

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